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Talofa Muhamood, I think that this was okay. The idea of posting the journal on your blog was a good one but I didn't really enjoy it because I couldn't read it as clearly as I wanted and some words I couldn't read at all. I think next time you could change the colour of the text so you can read it clearer. I don't really have anything else to say except, It was a good post other than some areas. Keep up the good work.
Talofa Muhamood I think that this was okay, I really liked how you added lots of information into the post because if it was just, I liked pet day it would be boring. The idea of posting the journal on your blog was a good one but I didn't really enjoy it because I couldn't read it as clearly as I wanted and some words I couldn't read at all, so you could get someone else maybe to read it and see if they could see it and read it clearly. I think next time you could change the colour of the text so you can read it clearer. I don't really have anything else to say except, It was a good post other than some areas. Keep up the good work. Did you get to choose what you did in the day?
Talofa Muhamood,
ReplyDeleteI think that this was okay. The idea of posting the journal on your blog was a good one but I didn't really enjoy it because I couldn't read it as clearly as I wanted and some words I couldn't read at all.
I think next time you could change the colour of the text so you can read it clearer. I don't really have anything else to say except, It was a good post other than some areas. Keep up the good work.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
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I think that this was okay, I really liked how you added lots of information into the post because if it was just, I liked pet day it would be boring. The idea of posting the journal on your blog was a good one but I didn't really enjoy it because I couldn't read it as clearly as I wanted and some words I couldn't read at all, so you could get someone else maybe to read it and see if they could see it and read it clearly.
I think next time you could change the colour of the text so you can read it clearer. I don't really have anything else to say except, It was a good post other than some areas. Keep up the good work.
Did you get to choose what you did in the day?
Kind Regards